Раздел 4. Письмо
При выполнении задания обратите внимание на необходимость соблюдения указанного в задании объема текста. Текст недостаточного объема, а также часть текста, превышающая требуемый объем, не щцениваються
Задание:
You have received a lrtter from your English-speaking pen-friend Jane who writes:
... My Granny lives in America and can't often come to England. I'm going to spend Christmas vacation at her place. She is really good at cooking a roast turkey and many other tasty things. And what are you doing now? Do you have any plans for your vacation? Will you visit your grandparents? ...
Write a letter to Jane.
In your letter answer her 3 questions.
Write 80-100 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.
При выполнении задания обратите внимание на необходимость соблюдения указанного в задании объема текста. Текст недостаточного объема, а также часть текста, превышающая требуемый объем, не щцениваються
Задание:
You have received a lrtter from your English-speaking pen-friend Jane who writes:
... My Granny lives in America and can't often come to England. I'm going to spend Christmas vacation at her place. She is really good at cooking a roast turkey and many other tasty things. And what are you doing now? Do you have any plans for your vacation? Will you visit your grandparents? ...
Write a letter to Jane.
In your letter answer her 3 questions.
Write 80-100 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.
Hello Jane,
ОтветитьУдалитьThanks for your letter. I read your letter and I can answer for your questions. Now I'm preparing for the New year and buy gifts for my friends and relatives. For you I also bought a gift, but it's a surprise.
On my vacation I'm going to celebrate the New year with parents and friends. I think we will have a good time.
Unfortunately, my grandparents live in Germany so I can`t visit their. But in next year I may will visit my grandparents.Well, that is all for now.
Good bye, Oleg.
99 слов
I can't visit THEM
УдалитьBut NEXT year ( without in)
I MAY WILL VISIT (mistake)
Well - 4
Hello , Jane
ОтветитьУдалитьThanks for your letter. How are you? I hope all is going well.
Now I`m preparing for the New Year. I`m going to spend my vacations in cottage. My grandma will visit us and I have prepared a present for her. I think it will be great!
Have you prepared gifts for you parents? Can you cook your grandmother recipes? How many days will you spend at her place?
Now, I have to go. I think you will have a good vacation.
With love, Dasha
My grandma IS GOING TO visit us
УдалитьI hope EVERYTHING is..
With love,
Dasha (с новой строчки)
Hello Jane,
ОтветитьУдалитьThanks for your last letter. How are you? I hope you are well. Now I'm preparing for the New Year and buy gifts for my friends and relatives. If you want to receive you gift you should wait, because it’s a surprise.
I am going to celebrate New Year with my family at first and then I am going to go for a walk. I think we will have a good time.
Fortunately, my grandparents are there. We are going to celebrate New Year together. That’s all for now.
Good bye, Michael.
94 words
Good bye,
УдалитьMichael
Well done - 5 -
Yep, thx u very much
УдалитьHi, Jane,
ОтветитьУдалитьHow nice of you to write me.I realle should write you sooner but I was sitting my exams. Anyway I'm glad to hear you will have great holidays.
What about me, I'm cooking Christmas snaks with my Mom now.I have no plans to my vocation but I'd like to go to cafe with my old friends. My Granny is going to visit our family at the New Year night and then go to her friends' place.
So I'd better go now because I have a lot of work. Lets meet next year and have some fun.
Kisses,Kate
100 words
I SHOULD REALLY HAVE WRITTEN
УдалитьNEW YEAR EVE
KISSES,
Kate
Well!! Хорошее содержание, 1-й и последний абзацы, но есть ошибки - 4
Hi,Jane,
ОтветитьУдалитьHow are you?I think you are really good.Because you are going to spend your vacation with your granny.
Now I have little time and I am tired.School and dancing all the time.On weekends I am going out with friends or going to the shopping centre.
I have no plans for my vacation.Maybe I will meet with my godmother which I haven`t seen so long.
I will not visit my grandparents.I live with them and see them every day.
See you later.Good vacations.
With love,Polly.
95 words.
Hi,Jane.
ОтветитьУдалитьI am glade to get you letter.I hope,that you will your vacation at your granny well.
My vacation will start in two weeks.I will spend my vacation in the city.I have some plans.I am going to read a book.I am going to visit our zoo with my friend.I will paint a lot and I will make a collage.I will not visit my grandparents,because they a going to visit us. Now I am studying computer science.It is a hard nut for me.
I am really looking forward to you new letter.
Love,Albi.
93 words
you will SPEND - пропущен глагол
УдалитьWell! -5
Hi, Jane,
ОтветитьУдалитьThank you for your letter. How are you? I hope everything is all right.
Now is a black friday, so i go shopping, to buy presents for my family. I have bought a scarf for my Mom and perfume for my Dad yet.
On vacations i am going to the country house to visit my grandmother. I am going to buy baking dishes for her, because cooking is her hobby.
Now i have to do my homework, see you later.
Good bye, George.
84 words.
I - всегда с большой буквы, название дня недели- тоже, слово yet употребляется в конце отрицательных предложений.Какая связь между Black Friday and shopping?
УдалитьNot very well
Hi, Jane!
ОтветитьУдалитьThanks for your letter. How are you? I hope you are all right. I see your questions and I would answer with a great pleasure. Well, now I am decorating a Christmass tree. I will put the photo of our tree in an envelope. I am going to celebrate New Year with my relatives and then with my best freinds. I hope we would enjoy our holidays.
I am really looking forward to new letter from you.
With love from Saint-P, Slava.
85 words
I've seen your questions
Удалитьlooking forward for A new letter
нет ответа на вопрос Willl you visit your grandparents ?
I'm sure you can write better...
Dear Jane,
ОтветитьУдалитьI was very glad to receive your letter! You know, my grandma lives in another city, in Moscow, and every winter and summer vacation I visit her. This vacation I’m spending in Moscow too. And I’m very excited about the trip because this time I’m going there without my parents that means that I will be on my own. By the way, now I’m making a list of things which I will take with me.
Well, it’s all I wanted to tell you. Write me soon!
Love,
Olga
90 слов
Well done - 5
УдалитьHi, Jane,
ОтветитьУдалитьThanks for you latter. How are you? Now I'm think about presents for my parents, but I don't know what. I'm going to spend Christmas vacations with my relatives. I'm going to visit my grandparents on my vacations. They live in very wonderful place. My grandmother cook very delicious food and I like listen grandfathers stories about his live. I'm going to take many photos. I hope see you on the next holidays.
Love, Rita.
91 words
LATTER, I'M THINK (!!!), I don't know WHAT TO CHOOSE, DURING my vacation, . live in A wonderful place, Drandma COOKS, I LIKE LISTENING
ОтветитьУдалитьTo see you next year
много ошибок - 3
Hello Jane,
ОтветитьУдалитьThanks for your letter. I read your letter and I can answer for your questions.Now I'm reading book F.M.Dostoevski "teenager" than I'm preparing for the New year and buy gifts for my friends and relatives. I'm going to visit my grandparents on my vacations. My grandmother cook very delicious food and I like listen grandfathers stories about his live. I am really looking forward to new letter from you.
With love from Moscow, Pasha
82 слова
Hi Jane
ОтветитьУдалитьSorry, but I couldn't write you. I had some problems with my school. Oh,you are so happy, I want to go with you but I can't. I'm going to Switzerland with my family. I think that you will have great time there. I'm cooking meal now. My grandparents will go to us tomorrow, so I want to surprise them. On this vacation they are going to us, and I'm happy about it.
I need to go now, because I should make a cake.
Write later,
Dima