For pupils
8a, v form
Think of the last time you ate out. Write a short e-mail to your English penfriend describing a family meal out.( 70-11 words)
8a, v form
Think of the last time you ate out. Write a short e-mail to your English penfriend describing a family meal out.( 70-11 words)
The last time I ate out was a week ago. I was with my friends, Paul and Alex. We was in susi-bar, called `Eurasia`, We took one susi-set, that costs 1500 rubles. Price was reasonable, because we have a nice discount. We want to take lemonade, but our waiter doesn`t recommend it, he recommends a fruit-drink, called mors. It was cheapper. The portions were huge! I was really full when we finished.
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УдалитьHello, Elena Nikolaevna
Sorry for my silence. Now I can tell you about my last ate out. The last time I ate out was a week ago. I was with my friends, Paul and Alex. We was in susi-bar, called `Eurasia`, We took one susi-set, that costs 1500 rubles. Price was reasonable, because we have a nice discount. We want to take lemonade, but our waiter doesn`t recommend it, he recommends a fruit-drink, called mors. It was cheapper. The portions were huge! I was really full when we finished.
Bye,
Slava.
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Hello Elena Nikolaevna,
Удалитьmy last ate out
It was a week ago when I ate out he the last time
We were
sushi bar
the price
he recomended
Много ошибок, не думаешь!!! - 3
The last time I ate out was a week ago. I was with my father. We went at McDonalds. It was very cool. We went to the supermarket called "Lenta" but we decide oh, sorry Idecide to go at McDonalds. We took a big meal. There were two Double CheesBurgers, three Potatoes Village, 20 Chicken McNuggets, two big cokes(Coca - Cola), Potatoe Fried and two little pies with blackberry and strawberry. It cost 986 rubblies. Price was resonable.
ОтветитьУдалитьI recomend you this nice and cool restaurant because it has reasonable prices and great waiters and ofcourse the best food! The portions were huge! We were really full when we finished.
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УдалитьWe went to M.D.
Удалитьwe decided
I decided
The price was
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Last Sunday I ate out at sushi bar, called "Eurasia".It was my friend`s Birthday. When I left, I was`n still hungry. There was a lot of fun and a lot of people.The waiter was very quick and we were not waiting him for a long time.Firstly there were so many dishes to choose from and their prices was reasonable. When the waiter brought us our dishes, they turned out very huge! I was really full when we finished. I would recommend this restaurant for my friends.
ОтветитьУдалитьwas'n - что это?
Удалитьwaiting for him
Firstly,
their prices were
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One week ago I visited the museums with my parents and I wanted to eat. We went in cafe "Tea spoon". The portions were little. The prices turned out to be reasonable, but there was a really long queue. The waiter mixed up our order. Luckily we were beside and our order quickly changed. I wasn't really full when we finished and when we left, I was still hungry.
ОтветитьУдалитьI wouldn't recommend it, but go or not go there, you should decide yourself.
We went into the cafe
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we were beside
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Dear Stacy,
ОтветитьУдалитьThanks a lot for your letter. I’ve promised you to tell about the last time my family ate out. Well, last month after visiting the museum we went to café “Teremok”. There weren’t many dishes to choose from, but the food was very tasty and portions were huge, so I was really full when we finished. Now it is your turn to tell me about the last time you ate out.
Write me soon.
Love,
Olga.
Well done! Your mark is 5
УдалитьHey Elena,
ОтветитьУдалитьHow it going? How is your family? Give me a ring when u come in St-Petersburg:)
The last time when I ate out was a two month ago with my family at the restaurant in the center of my city. There wasn't a long queue and at once we sat down near big and beautiful window. When we came, I was still hungry, but I was really full when we fineshed, because the portions were huge and delicious. I took a fish and orange juice? my sister took lamb chop and tea with lemon. It was french restaurant BUT prices turned out to be resonable. I would recommended it for u.
I waiting you here and when you're coming to visit me we'll go there.
Hugs and kisses,
Maryana=*
near a big and beautiful window
УдалитьI took some fish
a lamb chop
a tea ( a cup of tea) with lemon
I'm waiting
This weekend I was at a sushi bar with my friends Sasha and Slava Leshey.my ordered a sushi set for 5500 but since it was 70% discount we bought for 1500. We got a very good waiter, he helped us to save and rezultate we bought a jug of juice, lemonade instead of harmful. We ate very much, it was delicious, the dishes were very large I advise everyone!
ОтветитьУдалитьЗабыл поздороваться
Удалитьin a Sushi Bar
My order a sushi set for ......we bought for 1500
We got a very good waiter ... и так далее- до конца
неправильно составлены фразы, нет заключительного абзаца, не попрощался
Плохо!!!!!
Hi Elena
ОтветитьУдалитьThe last time I ate out was four month ago.It was my Mother`s Birthday.First,there was so many dishes to choose from.Then we ordered different dishes.When the waiter came he mixed up our dishes.My father orderd grilled fish but the waiter brought for him boiled fish with vegetables.My mother ordered roast prawns but the waiter brought for her grilled chicken.My order wasn`t mix.The prices turned out to be reasonable.I was very full when we finished.In your next letter tell me about the last time you ate out.
Catch you later
Polly
Hi Elena,
УдалитьIt was four months ago when I ate out the last time.
Catch you later, -не забывай про запятые
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Dear Alice,
ОтветитьУдалитьI'm sorry I haven't written for so long. It's because I was in Prague last week.
My Mom has Birthday this week and we went to famous restourant named ''Cherny Orel''. There was varied menu and wide choise of meat dishes. We ordered lot of delitios food.The portions were huge! And prices turned out expensive.We were really full when we finished. But I wouldn't recommed this restourant because the waiter didn't give us a check.So I think they overcharged us.
Sorry but i have to go now.
Lots of love,
Kate
ordered a lot of
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but the prices turned out to be expensive
Sorry but I have
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Hi,Elena .
ОтветитьУдалитьI'm sorry ,because I haven't written you before .I have some problems with my studying .But now it's OK .
By the way ,you asked me about me last visiting the cafe .Well ,I went to the cafe with my friends two weeks ago . We went to "Papa Jon's ". It was great . When we went there wasn't queue . We wanted to eat so much ,so we ordered 2 big pizzas . They were so tasty . The prices turned out to be reasonable. There was a very attractive waiter .
I think that "papa Jon's "is the best place in our town ,when we can eat pizza !
See you soon,
Dima
wasn't a queue
Удалитьwell done - 5
Hello Helena!
ОтветитьУдалитьExuse that so long did not write.
I and my mum went to the restaurant.The restaurant is called "Evrazia".We very much like this restaurant because there the many dishes.We have ordered fride fish and omlette.The portions were huge!Fish was excellent.I was really full when we finished.There was a really long queue but all of us equally remained are happy!
I advise to visit in this restaurant.
With love,
Albi.
Excuse
УдалитьWe very much like...
there the many dishes
the fish was exellent
but all of us equally remained
a lot of mistakes -3
Hello,Elena N.
ОтветитьУдалитьYesterday was my mother`s birthday.I,my father and mom went to the restoran.When we left the house,I was hungry.In restoran first of all,there were so many dishes to choose from.We ordered lunch,but the waiter mixed up our order.So we had to ate what brought us.The portions were huge!I was really full when we finished.
Goodbye
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it was my mother's
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mixed up our orders
had to eat
what the water brought us
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Hello Elena Nicolaevna!i am sorry that I haven't written you before. Yesterday I with my family went to the Italian restorant.First of all there were so many dishes to choose from. I ordered salad " Cesar " , fried chicken legs , pizza "margarita" and a bottle of cola. The prices were very reasonable .The portions were very huge and when we finished I was really full. I recommend this restorant to all my friends. See you soon, George
ОтветитьУдалитьI 'm sorry -с большой буквы
Удалитьrestaurant неправильно написано слово
See you soon-с новой строчки